I like spaghetti and ramen.
· 2021-05-07
번호 : 49027 조회 : 162 작성자 : qaz5705 2021-05-07 오후 8:25:59
< 원문 >
Among things to eat, I like spaghetti and ramen the most.
The spaghetti noodles are long, so it's hard to pick them up with chopsticks.
The ramen is a little spicy but it's delicious.
Kindergarten was off today, I didn't go to kindergarten.
So my mom gave me my favorite ramen for lunch.
I am happy to eat my favorite ramen.
< 첨삭지도 >
쨔자잔~♪♪♬ 축하해요!
친구의 일기가 이번달 베스트 일기로 선정되었어요!

So, why do you like spaghetti despite such difficulty?

좋아하는 음식을 소개했으니까, 왜 좋아하는지도 다음 일기에 써보면 좋겠어요.^^

'but'은 같은 성격의 말을 잇는 접속사이므로, 주어+동사가 같을 경우, 반복해서 쓰지 않습니다.

The ramen is a little spicy but it's delicious.
-> Ramen is a little spicy but delicious.
(라면은 조금 맵지만 맛있다.)