friends
· 2021-09-02
번호 : 49048 조회 : 132 작성자 : kksa 2021-08-20 오후 8:20:40
< 원문 >
Today I played with friends at the school.
I went to friends and stationery stores.
I didn't have any money,
so I just had to watch it,
but it was good to be with friends.
I want to play with friends
< 첨삭지도 >
쨔자잔~♪♪♬ 축하해요!
친구의 일기가 이번달 베스트 일기로 선정되었어요!

'went to' 뒤에는 장소를 나타내는 단어가 나와야 해요!

-> I went to the stationery stores with my friends. 라고 바꾸어주면 좋겠네요!


친구랑 함께하면 물건을 사지 않아도 즐겁지요! ^^